Writing for the Internet is not the
same as writing for a printed page. Writers who write
for the Internet, especially for Website Marketing,
would do well to follow some simple guidelines if they
want quality text that sells.
These days the exciting visuals on websites have started
to overshadow the meat of a website, the words. They
say a picture is worth a thousand words, but really,
how many words does a dancing monkey or rotating starburst
convey to you? How can that bouncing frog in the upper
left hand corner of the page tell you what you need
to know about, say, lawn care? Not much, though he may
be cute to look at.
The website is a new medium in the world of television,
newspapers, magazines, and radio. This form of communication
is something of a combination of all of those that have
come before it. Needless to say, when there’s a new
kid in town, new rules apply. But we can’t throw all
the old rules out either.
The copy (text) of your website is where the action
is. This is where you hold the attention of your audience,
and this is where your word choice and grammar are critical.
People may think your exploding fireworks graphics are
cool, but if you misspell your product caption “cheep
fireworks,” they are going to laugh at you and click
the back button.
There are several mistakes that should always be avoided
when writing your website copy. If you follow these
basic guidelines, and always keep your visitors in mind,
you can come up with something that will amaze even
the most jaded web surfers.
Tip 1: Please, please, please be careful
that your spelling and grammar is correct. If you are
writing your copy on your own, you may wish to consult
the Associated Press Style Guide, Strunk and White’s
Elements of Style or another solid grammar guide. They
are quick and handy references in case you are unsure
if you should use a colon or a semi-colon, and they
can help you keep all ten thousand comma rules straight
in your head. Also pay attention to your spellchecker.
Almost all word processors have them. Good grammar and
spelling is not only expected of you, but it gives your
site an air of professionalism that customers deserve.
Tip 2: For Pete’s sake, keep the exclamation
marks to a minimum! They sound overly dramatic! They
make people antsy! They make you sound like a guy wearing
a clown suit on a used-car commercial! It’s annoying!
And, bottom line, exclamation marks don’t make your
sales pitch more effective.
Tip 3: Keep it simple. While we stress
the importance of words, we don’t suggest you use too
many of them, either. A customer faced with a wall of
words before them may be too bored or too busy to read
them all. People have short attention spans in this
click-click net navigating world, so keep that in mind.
Use simple, concise, easy to understand words and you’ll
do much better than if you try to talk your website
visitors to death.
Tip 4: Keep it scannable. White space
is your friend. It’s hard to read online, so you want
to keep eyestrain to a minimum. Be a razor-sharp editor
and cut out anything that might be dragging down the
rest of your copy. Don’t use run-on sentences. Don’t
make your paragraphs too long and bulky. Use big text,
descriptive headlines and short paragraphs. Use bold
text to help make your copy scannable, but use it judiciously.
If you make everything bold, it defeats the purpose.
Tip 5: When it comes to word choice,
choose words that are descriptive and helpful. Be specific.
Words like “great,” “awesome,” “super,” “new” and “improved”
don’t tell you much. But words that explain just why
your product is great and improved are much more helpful.
For example, if you sell shampoo, and you want to tell
everyone that it is now “new and improved,” explain
that now it has a cleaner, fresher scent, won’t leave
a greasy residue, and won’t spill if you drop it in
the shower. Now that’s something that tells me what
I want to know!
Tip 6: On a related note, don’t use
words that are too flowery or colloquial. Write appropriately
for the subject. If you are selling cowboy boots, you
can probably throw a few “pardners” and “l’il doggies”
in there, but that probably will not be so impressive
if you are writing for your office’s money marketing
page. Also, while you may have a well-versed Harvard
vocabulary, many of your customers may not. If you are
inclined to use words such as “sycophantic” and “pedagogy”
or “fungible,” you might consider leaving them out.
Also, though you may really want to use the word that
means, “to swarm like ants,’ you probably ought to avoid
having your visitors read, “The 6th graders formicated
all over the playground.” Your site’s readers may not
have a dictionary handy.
Tip 7: Organize your information. Start
simple, and then get to the details. There’s no need
to tell your visitors everything at once. While your
homepage is similar to the welcome mat to your Internet
abode, the rest of your pages are like the rooms. Make
sure they are friendly and inviting and organized, not
a cluttered, musty mess like at your Uncle Leo’s house.
Your homepage should focus on telling your visitors
specifically why they want to enter your home. What’s
in there for them? On your inner pages, you can go into
more detail. A lot of information is good, but break
it up into well thought-out, organized pieces that are
easy for your visitor to handle. Who wants to tackle
a page 10 scrollbars long? But 10 pages, correctly organized,
can help your visitor find the information they need
and will make them comfortable, happy customers.
Tip 8: Lastly, if you are not fully
confident that you can create the exact kind of copy
you are looking for, you can always hire an experienced
professional to help you. They may help you see potential
for your website you might never have thought of on
your own. And they can help stop you from making a fool
of yourself if you accidentally say, “all sinners will
be vaccinated on Tuesday” when you meant to say “all
seniors”.
You can have the greatest layout, the prettiest shade
of background color, the easiest navigation bars, but
if your copy is messy, hard to read, or uninformative,
your website is going to tank.
About The Author: Meghan Whitmore - is a freelance copywriter at The
Writers for Hire, a professional copywriting agency
based in Houston, Texas.
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